Thursday, March 14, 2013

The Haunted Locker of Green Lake School

The first person who comments on this post starts the story. 

Whoever comments next must read the posts above and continue the story. 

The last person to comment must write the conclusion. 

Use this photo as inspiration. 

16 comments:

  1. There once was a little boy named Gityburgsiftice Opifivuticisaret. This little boy was at his school wandering the halls, just calmly waiting for his mom to pick him up. He wandered for a while, then found himself in the basement of the school. Nobody went in the basement of the school. There was one room in this rather small basement. The boy wondered whether or not to go into this room. A few minutes later, he decided to just take a quick peek into the room. He slowly opened the door, and took one step in. It was a small room with one row of small lockers. He slowly walked up, and opened one of the lockers. There was nothing inside, except a small letter that had the words, do not open, on the front. These words just made the boy want to open the letter even more. Finally he couldn't resist any longer. He opened the letter, and started reading. Suddenly a small sound started up in the locker, bet grew louder and louder. He jumped out of the room, and sprinted up the stairs. His mom was there waiting for him, so he jumped into the car as fast as possible.There in the small room sat the opened letter, with the glowing words of, WE ARE COMING.

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  2. He told his mom and they sped off. They got home went in side and locked the doors. they ran into his moms room because it had no Windows in it. the next morning she woke up and he was gone. So she got up and opened the door and ran out and looked in his room the bathroom and the living room he was no where to be found. She then went outside and there were some random people standing in the driveway. then She went back to the school and went to the room where this happen and he was standing there saying, We will get you. We will get you. We will get you. She ran over and grabbed him and his head did a complete 360

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  3. So after he was having a 360 panic attack. He started to run. He ended up by a river and saw a guy. This guy wanted to kill him and it was a bad guy and this bad guy had a gun. He shot but Luckly a deer jumped out in font on the shot. The deer lived. He ran to the neer by gas station. He got a candy bar and a soda. He left and went to the high way

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  5. This takes place after Ryan's: As his head kept spinning she screamed and turned around. When she turned around she only saw him again, it was like he was everywhere. She was terrified, screaming for help. After three hours somebody finally heard her, but it was a trap. She had already contracted it and was now possessed. There was now two and they were cornering in on the help. Since he was by the door he decided to run. He ran and ran but there was nobody that could help. He had been exposed and would soon become one...

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  6. "Watch Your Back" He kept saying and i was. I was scared to death and ever time a turned a corner i was ready to scream and run away as quickly as possible. I then new I had no other choice so a ran to the police station and told them what was going on. they told me not to worry and that i was safe there. I dint believe them. And when i turned around next I saw the guy starting to come out of the wall. I flipped out and ran for cover behind the cops. they looked around and said to me that there was nothing there. So i thought to myself. "Was all I saw Just a illusion?"

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    1. Defently was not an illiusion.

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    2. You changed the perspective that the story was written in...

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  7. But then in the blink of an eye a huge guy came crashing through the wall with a fully loaded Ar-15 and just started blasting away. Everyone tried to get behind stuff for cover but a few unlucky officers were blasted quite badly. Thankfully little Gityburgsiftice Opifivuticisaret was not wounded and he quickly ran to the back where he got deep in to the jail where he waited for the worst. Meanwhile out in the lobby of the station it was mayhem there were gun shots going off everywhere and soon there were tanks and army men surrounding the building. But the guy was acting super human with super human speed reflexes and agility he even didn’t seem to be affected when he got shot by wimpy pistols.

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    1. Well that go violent quick hahahahahaha.

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  8. And then what happened next, will blow your mind. The ghost chased everyone down, killing everyone, and was never seen. Only one person could catch the ghost, and that was Ms. Chetto. The ghost was killing everyone with a book called, "Uncle Tom's Cabin" And Ms. Chetto was the only one who could stop him. She got on her computer, deleted the assignments for Uncle Toms Cabin, and everyone rejoiced and was saved from the ghost! blah

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    1. How kind of Ms. Chetto to delete all of the assignments. Too bad this is a work of fiction.

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  9. Ms. Chetto,
    How do we know who is the last person if people do not post. Will the story ever end?

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    1. Well, process of elimination would have told us who had to conclude it, but we had two students who did not complete their DQ, so I guess the story is up in the air for now.

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  10. But little did they know the ghost wasn't actually dead it was just resting his eyes. That means it will still come for the person that tried to kill the ghost. Out of rage the ghost wakes up and hunts down the person who tried to kill him and after 2,500 years he gave up. Not only did he realize it was a waste of time but he also realized that the people that tried to kill him were dead by now and there for he could not kill them. Out of sadness he dug himself under the school till a friendly ghost named Casper cam along. To be continued.

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