I felt vey ashamed about what happened to me. I cant believe my parents would take such a picture. Maybe next, we can take the pictre agian. I also have no idea of what happened to me. Iwoke up and I cant believe what happened to me! This was very strange. I will now drink my unicorn juice.
Today was a very strange day. I woke up as a donkey. thinking what on earth is going on!!! I brained stormed and came to my mind that something strange happened, very, very strange. Then, after my brian storm, I came to my mind again that I was eaten by a rihno. Wait, what? Thats not true!!! I finally figured out that I was eaten by Mrs. Chetto!!! Wait, thats not true, then my mom took a picture of me oh no! I got ashamed when my mom saved picture. I was so embarrased. So, I went to the market and bought a bucket of fish sticks. They tasted great!!! I guest this is the end.
I was hoping someone would take the perspective of the donkey! I think you were the only one, although I would have liked for your post to have made sense. Being funny is great, but the purpose of this is to improve our writing skills. Use your humor to enhance your writing, not detract from it.
I would be so mad if my parents took a picture like that.i would tare i up and throw it away. So i did not get made fun of and picked on for the face i made. Oh i forgot to tell you that i screamed like a girl, and my friends where in the car so i made them promise that they would not tell any one about it.so i hope they don't tell any one .
Remember to proofread your submissions. There are many mistakes in this paragraph that could have been fixed by simply reading it over before you published.
Today a strange think happened. After watching the elephants do flips at the zoo, I thought the day couldn't get any stranger. Well it did. After Eating my ice cream cone in the car, I decided to take a nap. As I was sleeping, I had a strange dream that a donkey was staring at me. I awoke from loud laughing, and to my surprise there was a very scary donkey staring at me. I did not see it coming so I yelled at it to get out of my face, and at that moment my mom took a picture. Personally, I think the picture looks pretty awesome.
I asked you to email it to me since I know that it isn't your fault that our filters are blocking your ability to post on the class blog. As soon as the tech admins fix this, you will be able to post as an author. But submitting it on here is fine as well, we can just paste it in the proper place when the glitch has been fixed.
After a long day at NASA's animal space program of watching monkeys getting launched in to the sun, there were the reject animals. Animals to big and to heavy to fit inside a space craft. Now these animals must have been pumped to get launched toward the sun, and who wouldn't be mad about not getting to go into space? So back to us. As we were leaving, one of these reject animals was standing on the side of the road, and since I was around rockets shooting flames all day long, so I rolled down the window to cool off. Now remember, this was one of the reject animals so he was pretty mad. He stuck his head in the window, and took his anger out on me. I screamed in terror. I screamed so loudly, even the monkeys half way to the sun could here me. My dad quickly pulled out his iPhone and snapped a photo. My dad was laughing all the way home.
Okay there is not enough time for an answer so I will post my 1 page blog here.(please do not get mad Ms. Chetto)
My summer vacation. I would like to talk about vacation to the Upper Peninsula Michigan where we rent a cabin on the lake every year. We left on August 17th to head up. It is about a 6 hour drive all the way up to our cabin which is by Watersmeet. We stopped at a candy store on the way there and I got a ton of candy. (Unfortunately it was gone in about half an hour) When we got up to our cabin we unpacked all of our bags, which my sisters had like 10 bags. (5 for shoes and 5 for clothes) Once we unpacked my brother and I got our fishing poles set up and went down to the dock to fish. The dock is right next to our cabin which is very convenient. I do not remember exactly what we had for dinner every night but I know it was something good. The next day we rented our canoes and went out canoeing. We paddled about 2 miles to land and then portaged our canoes and food like a quarter mile to a different lake. We then paddled again and portaged again and finally paddled to our destination. It was probably our hardest day of canoeing. Every day when we got back to our cabin we would go fishing off the dock and swimming. We never caught any big fish off the dock but still small ones such as Croppie and Rock Bass. Every night we would either play a family game, have a campfire, or go onto the dock and look at the stars. (I saw 2 shooting stars) On all of the other days we would canoe to other amazing lakes and stop at beaches and sand bars. At one of the really cool sand bars, about 15 ft wide, the drop off in the water would drop like 5 ft deep every 2 ft you walked. It was really fun. I also caught 2 really big bass at that sand bar. We stayed up at our cabin for a week and saw lot’s of wild life like loons and otters. On our last day we really wanted to see some animals, but did not find any on our way to our destination. Then, on our way back we practically ran into an otter swimming and then saw a huge black bear and it’s cub. We got pretty close but not to close where we would be in danger. My dad took an amazing picture of the cub standing up on its back two legs trying to attack a tree. We followed the bears in our canoes and at one point the baby bear jumped into the water. Of course my sister that was in my canoe was really scared, but I thought it was amazing. On our way home we were all a little sad but I took some really funny and cool videos with my flip cam. There was also a dog that my sister Emily, my brother Max, and I would always play with and we would try to get him to jump into the water. When we got home we unpacked and I watched all my videos I had taken and deleted about a quarter of the boring ones because I ran out of room on my video camera. It is one of my favorite summer vacations, but I also go to Door County to my grandpa and grandma’s condo on lake Michigan where we kayak instead of canoe.
Sweet.That would be the first thing I would say i if my parents took a picture of me like that . I would be so happy that I would probably take that picture and put it everywhere so everyone could see me at a time when I looked my stupidest and funny. Then I would ask if we could go there again and get a picture of everyone in the family like that. Then if we did that we could put pictures of them everywhere to and that would be really cool.Thank goodness for photographs.
I would be mad at that llama and mad at my parents for taking only that picture.I look out my window and see this weird face looking at me.My first thought was he was going to eat me and then I smell his horrible breath, it smelled like stinky trash.then all of a sudden my parents started laughing as hard as they could, they made me really mad.This wasn't the best part of my vacation,it was the worst part.
We were driving to the grand canyon and I decided to take a nap in the car because we had already taken a two day train ride to Arizona, and I was tired of looking out the window at scenery. So I decided to take a nap. During the nap I had a nightmare about...donkeys. During the nightmare I was getting chased by an angry mob of fire breathing donkeys they chased my for two miles! Then I finally reached my getaway hover car. I told the driver to take me somewhere without Donkeys. So I decided to take a nap.(A dream within a dream sound familiar?*wink*) This time the dream was about me playing Football for the university of Georgia. IT was fourth down one yard to go,on our ten yard-line, down by six, four seconds to go, I was Quarterback, "hut" I caught the ball I see one of my deceivers open down field I'm just about to throw the ball and I hear "Hee Haugh"! When I looked over at the side line I saw a fire breathing donkey...I woke up from the football dream then the donkey dream...all of the sudden I see a donkey two inches away from my face!!! When My dad took that picture I was so mad But at the same time to tired to be mad!!!
One day we were on our way to a flee market. When we got there is was canceled, and instead of a market we found petting Zoo. It was kind of creepy at first. Then all of a sudden a donkey came to the car door when I was not looking and started to make that annoying sound that donkeys make, and it scared me to death. I jumped so high that I thought f I wasn’t wearing a seat belt that I would of gone straight to the moon. And what do you know, it happened to be right when my dad was taking a photo. When I saw the picture it was embarrassing at first, but after a while I kind of liked it. So I guess I got used to it.
I was in South Dakota and I saw this guy get out of there car. They hit a buffalo with a rock in the butt. The buffalo ran after them so fast. It hit the guy so hard he died. But don't worry the car was not damaged. ;)
today my family went to the zoo. we saw alot of donkeys. then my family told me to get in the car. i found my sister put corn in my pants and rolled the windows down. then the donkeys came. they tryed to get my pants.
I felt vey ashamed about what happened to me. I cant believe my parents would take such a picture. Maybe next, we can take the pictre agian. I also have no idea of what happened to me. Iwoke up and I cant believe what happened to me! This was very strange. I will now drink my unicorn juice.
ReplyDeleteToday was a very strange day. I woke up as a donkey. thinking what on earth is going on!!! I brained stormed and came to my mind that something strange happened, very, very strange. Then, after my brian storm, I came to my mind again that I was eaten by a rihno. Wait, what? Thats not true!!! I finally figured out that I was eaten by Mrs. Chetto!!! Wait, thats not true, then my mom took a picture of me oh no! I got ashamed when my mom saved picture. I was so embarrased. So, I went to the market and bought a bucket of fish sticks. They tasted great!!! I guest this is the end.
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I was hoping someone would take the perspective of the donkey! I think you were the only one, although I would have liked for your post to have made sense. Being funny is great, but the purpose of this is to improve our writing skills. Use your humor to enhance your writing, not detract from it.
DeleteI would be so mad if my parents took a picture like that.i would tare i up and throw it away. So i did not get made fun of and picked on for the face i made. Oh i forgot to tell you that i screamed like a girl, and my friends where in the car so i made them promise that they would not tell any one about it.so i hope they don't tell any one .
ReplyDeleteRemember to proofread your submissions. There are many mistakes in this paragraph that could have been fixed by simply reading it over before you published.
DeleteToday a strange think happened. After watching the elephants do flips at the zoo, I thought the day couldn't get any stranger. Well it did. After Eating my ice cream cone in the car, I decided to take a nap. As I was sleeping, I had a strange dream that a donkey was staring at me. I awoke from loud laughing, and to my surprise there was a very scary donkey staring at me. I did not see it coming so I yelled at it to get out of my face, and at that moment my mom took a picture. Personally, I think the picture looks pretty awesome.
ReplyDeleteI think the picture looks pretty awesome as well. :)
DeleteWhoops my bad I intended to say thing in the first sentence.
ReplyDeleteUm.....where am I supposed to post my blog on the calendar because it is my day. Please help.
ReplyDeleteThanks Wyatt
I asked you to email it to me since I know that it isn't your fault that our filters are blocking your ability to post on the class blog. As soon as the tech admins fix this, you will be able to post as an author. But submitting it on here is fine as well, we can just paste it in the proper place when the glitch has been fixed.
DeleteAfter a long day at NASA's animal space program of watching monkeys getting launched in to the sun, there were the reject animals. Animals to big and to heavy to fit inside a space craft. Now these animals must have been pumped to get launched toward the sun, and who wouldn't be mad about not getting to go into space? So back to us. As we were leaving, one of these reject animals was standing on the side of the road, and since I was around rockets shooting flames all day long, so I rolled down the window to cool off. Now remember, this was one of the reject animals so he was pretty mad. He stuck his head in the window, and took his anger out on me. I screamed in terror. I screamed so loudly, even the monkeys half way to the sun could here me. My dad quickly pulled out his iPhone and snapped a photo. My dad was laughing all the way home.
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Thank goodness for iPhones!
DeleteOkay there is not enough time for an answer so I will post my 1 page blog here.(please do not get mad Ms. Chetto)
ReplyDeleteMy summer vacation.
I would like to talk about vacation to the Upper Peninsula Michigan where we rent a cabin on the lake every year. We left on August 17th to head up. It is about a 6 hour drive all the way up to our cabin which is by Watersmeet. We stopped at a candy store on the way there and I got a ton of candy. (Unfortunately it was gone in about half an hour) When we got up to our cabin we unpacked all of our bags, which my sisters had like 10 bags. (5 for shoes and 5 for clothes) Once we unpacked my brother and I got our fishing poles set up and went down to the dock to fish. The dock is right next to our cabin which is very convenient. I do not remember exactly what we had for dinner every night but I know it was something good. The next day we rented our canoes and went out canoeing. We paddled about 2 miles to land and then portaged our canoes and food like a quarter mile to a different lake. We then paddled again and portaged again and finally paddled to our destination. It was probably our hardest day of canoeing. Every day when we got back to our cabin we would go fishing off the dock and swimming. We never caught any big fish off the dock but still small ones such as Croppie and Rock Bass. Every night we would either play a family game, have a campfire, or go onto the dock and look at the stars. (I saw 2 shooting stars) On all of the other days we would canoe to other amazing lakes and stop at beaches and sand bars. At one of the really cool sand bars, about 15 ft wide, the drop off in the water would drop like 5 ft deep every 2 ft you walked. It was really fun. I also caught 2 really big bass at that sand bar. We stayed up at our cabin for a week and saw lot’s of wild life like loons and otters. On our last day we really wanted to see some animals, but did not find any on our way to our destination. Then, on our way back we practically ran into an otter swimming and then saw a huge black bear and it’s cub. We got pretty close but not to close where we would be in danger. My dad took an amazing picture of the cub standing up on its back two legs trying to attack a tree. We followed the bears in our canoes and at one point the baby bear jumped into the water. Of course my sister that was in my canoe was really scared, but I thought it was amazing. On our way home we were all a little sad but I took some really funny and cool videos with my flip cam. There was also a dog that my sister Emily, my brother Max, and I would always play with and we would try to get him to jump into the water. When we got home we unpacked and I watched all my videos I had taken and deleted about a quarter of the boring ones because I ran out of room on my video camera. It is one of my favorite summer vacations, but I also go to Door County to my grandpa and grandma’s condo on lake Michigan where we kayak instead of canoe.
Thanks
Wyatt
Holy Crap... And I thought I wrote a lot!
DeleteIt sounds like you had a wonderful time! What a cool way to spend your summer. I would have been sad for that trip to end as well. Very nice job. :)
DeleteSweet.That would be the first thing I would say i if my parents took a picture of me like that . I would be so happy that I would probably take that picture and put it everywhere so everyone could see me at a time when I looked my stupidest and funny. Then I would ask if we could go there again and get a picture of everyone in the family like that. Then if we did that we could put pictures of them everywhere to and that would be really cool.Thank goodness for photographs.
ReplyDeleteWhere would we be without photographs? Miserable, that's where. :)
DeleteI would be mad at that llama and mad at my parents for taking only that picture.I look out my window and see this weird face looking at me.My first thought was he was going to eat me and then I smell his horrible breath, it smelled like stinky trash.then all of a sudden my parents started laughing as hard as they could, they made me really mad.This wasn't the best part of my vacation,it was the worst part.
ReplyDeleteMaybe the donkey noticed you were sleeping and simply wanted to sing you a song?
DeleteWe were driving to the grand canyon and I decided to take a nap in the car because we had already taken a two day train ride to Arizona, and I was tired of looking out the window at scenery. So I decided to take a nap. During the nap I had a nightmare about...donkeys. During the nightmare I was getting chased by an angry mob of fire breathing donkeys they chased my for two miles! Then I finally reached my getaway hover car. I told the driver to take me somewhere without Donkeys. So I decided to take a nap.(A dream within a dream sound familiar?*wink*) This time the dream was about me playing Football for the university of Georgia. IT was fourth down one yard to go,on our ten yard-line, down by six, four seconds to go, I was Quarterback, "hut" I caught the ball I see one of my deceivers open down field I'm just about to throw the ball and I hear "Hee Haugh"! When I looked over at the side line I saw a fire breathing donkey...I woke up from the football dream then the donkey dream...all of the sudden I see a donkey two inches away from my face!!! When My dad took that picture I was so mad But at the same time to tired to be mad!!!
ReplyDeleteDon't you just hate when donkey interrupt your dreams of football stardom? I know I do!!
DeleteOne day we were on our way to a flee market. When we got there is was canceled, and instead of a market we found petting Zoo. It was kind of creepy at first. Then all of a sudden a donkey came to the car door when I was not looking and started to make that annoying sound that donkeys make, and it scared me to death. I jumped so high that I thought f I wasn’t wearing a seat belt that I would of gone straight to the moon. And what do you know, it happened to be right when my dad was taking a photo. When I saw the picture it was embarrassing at first, but after a while I kind of liked it. So I guess I got used to it.
ReplyDeleteI was in South Dakota and I saw this guy get out of there car. They hit a buffalo with a rock in the butt. The buffalo ran after them so fast. It hit the guy so hard he died. But don't worry the car was not damaged. ;)
ReplyDeletetoday my family went to the zoo. we saw alot of donkeys. then my family told me to get in the car. i found my sister put corn in my pants and rolled the windows down. then the donkeys came. they tryed to get my pants.
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